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Hamadryad lament 04 by elsevilla Hamadryad lament 04 by elsevilla
Jolene Headhunter appears, well only psycally her toughts were already since page one.


thanxs to :iconkrash1111: for helping me out with the text, she did a great job.
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:iconharveymiki:
HarveyMiki Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist
OH my godness, this is just amazing
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:iconmemoirs000:
memoirs000 Featured By Owner May 6, 2011   Artist
holy....
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:iconotaguy:
Otaguy Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
it's crazy, is still working well!
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:iconmerkahia:
Merkahia Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
the few pages i saw where awesome...there is more of this?
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:iconmasben:
Masben Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2010
.....dime como se llama el comic te prometo que lo conseguire y lo comprare XD
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:icondethwish1350:
dethwish1350 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
man! i can't get nuff of this.. "3

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:iconmiremor:
miremor Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010
me encanta la tercera vinyeta y el arma de la ultima es estupenda, muy buen trabajo y muy buena galeria¡ :)
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:iconamigo747:
AmiGO747 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
Impossible!!You're great painter,thank you for your works....I'm your fan^^
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:iconashimbabbar:
ashimbabbar Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2009
This is first-rate stuff.
Questions: did you continue it ?
and where is p. 03 ?
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:iconettz:
ettz Featured By Owner May 16, 2009  Student Digital Artist
I want to see more of this!
Are you still doing this comic
or did you stop?
I hope you haven't!
I love the panel where she smiles, it's great.
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:iconcyan-king:
cyan-king Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
so...she's going to kill them...with one arm? XD
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:iconicesamurai:
icesamurai Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
some thing told me a comic my you would be the greating shit i've ever seen. Speaking on comics, do you have any that are out that i can buy?
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:icongraighost:
graighost Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009
A++ job. Very awesome.
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:icontecnophreak:
tecnophreak Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2009
your stuff inspires the hell outa me. thank you. :)
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:iconjuanlink661:
juanlink661 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2009  Student Filmographer
wow increible... cuando sale lo siguiente??

la historia parece interesante...
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:iconmoodiful819:
moodiful819 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2009
I love the bottom panel. Very detailed and I like how you build up the suspense.
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:icongrimh:
Grimh Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man wish I could smile after a wound like that. (Or still be alive at least) Great page looking forward to more!
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:iconvilenn:
Vilenn Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2009
Lovely lovely! I can't wait to see more of this.
:3
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:iconclapink:
Clapink Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2009  Student General Artist
Quiero dibujar como tuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu <3
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:iconjoysuke:
Joysuke Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
wow!!!excellent!
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:iconvalenciacheng:
valenciaCheng Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2008
i love that huuuuuuuuuge closeup of the sniper lady in the last panel. beautiful colors... and i hope she wins the battle!!!! O______O
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:iconelsevilla:
elsevilla Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
hahahah yeah we hope so
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:iconhash-cloud:
Hash-Cloud Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008
I love the characters and the work can't wait to see more
^^
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:iconelsevilla:
elsevilla Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
gracias
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:iconfenrirchu:
FenrirChu Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
: D amazing.
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:iconluciferlive:
luciferlive Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008  Professional Artist
beatiful work. when can we see more...
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:iconelsevilla:
elsevilla Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
you wont goona believe this but i was working on page 5 twice, and the computer shut down, so i had to start all over it, but now im saving every single step i do
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:iconluciferlive:
luciferlive Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008  Professional Artist
aaaaaargh! sort of makes you believe in a great cosmic super villain doesn't it?
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:iconkontoraktora:
Kontoraktora Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008
LOVE YOUR WORKS MAN!!!!!
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:iconelsevilla:
elsevilla Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
thanxs
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:iconhellyonwhite:
HellyonWhite Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Diooos que ganas tenía de ver a Jolene en acción ;_;
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:iconelsevilla:
elsevilla Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
he tenido problemas con la compu para la 5 pero ya trabajare en ella esta semana
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:iconkevin7lee:
Kevin7Lee Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008
Wow!
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:iconraposa:
Raposa Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
That's great man! I'm loving it! keep with it the great job *_*
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:iconrinian:
Rinian Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
I love the conversation going on between the little heads. It's like Jolene's got her own little audience! And it seems they can be pretty useful too. This character rocks~ :D
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mistakendestiny Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha...that's a twist. didn't expect that after the last page. nice work!
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:iconcoralio:
coralio Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
I was wondering if Bonnie got her name from "Bonnie and Clyde"... :D
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:iconemmisu:
emmisu Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Student General Artist
I love Jolene... more!
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outoftheblu Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol, this is awesome. I love the random talking inbetween.
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:iconfdrawer:
fdrawer Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
see parece q sirvio la ayuda pq el guion esta de pelos...muy buenos los textos =D
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MournfulKitties Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
Oh no... That is one smart girlie... xD; then again, if you knew you weren't going to die at the shot, I guess it wouldn't really matter getting sniped... xD;
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Tossino Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
I love her already. Can't wait for more. x3
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BlueVagabond Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Student General Artist
I think the artwork is really impressive. You're doing a really good job at digital coloring. But I feel that the blood looks a bit too much slappy added, epecially in the first panel, though its color is well chosen. And I enjoyed the shining effect in the last panel.
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:iconpan-pan-man:
Pan-Pan-Man Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
gahhhhh your awesome. Where did you learn to use a tablet and Photoshop like that?
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:iconjoverine:
joverine Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Professional General Artist
what ~xXRiderXx said
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:iconxxriderxx:
xXRiderXx Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
Fuckin' awesome. :D
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:iconcrackerjackthe4th:
Crackerjackthe4th Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2008
If you plan on releasing this in English, I highly, HIGHLY recommend you find and partner up with a writer who speaks English as a first language. Someone who really knows what they're doing.
And grammar isn't the only thing. For example: in real life, you don't ask if "someone pwned something." That's a word that was mistakenly created on the internet and you won't find it in any dictionary. That's really distracting and doesn't fit the context, because only nerds speak it in real life and that doesn't seem to fit the character.

Your English is great, but it takes so much more than that to write a good script.

Anyway...good luck with your comic.
The art is spectacular as always.
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alex-balrog Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008   Digital Artist
I think you're wrong to be honest...

you say that in real life only a nerd would ask "did you pwn her?"... well in the last panel she says "All of you shut up" this implies that all 3 of the comments immediately before that are made by different people, these people are likely to be people of Jolene Headhunter's team or party... Doesnt a team usually have someone remarkably clever among them? someone that works with computers a lot? a nerd?

so yeah, i dont think ';pwn' is a bad word to use here at all
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:iconcrackerjackthe4th:
Crackerjackthe4th Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
Yeah, there usually is the token nerd.
But point is, it's way out of place. It just throws off the rhythmn, and is kinda one of those "wtf" moments.

That was just one example, though.
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alex-balrog Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008   Digital Artist
Yes, i have to agree that this comment does throw the rhythmn of the panel off course a little...

but maybe the fantastic, amazing and uuuberly cool artist was trying to make the speech sound more realistic... because in real life speech doesn't always flow smoothly... just goes to show how cool elsevilla really is :D


....maybe
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